Friday, 12 September 2014

The house


WALT: use varied sentence beginnings and lengths. I think I did well at describing the house. I think I need to work on making it longer.




The house’s paint was peeling furiously and mostly covered in rusty old brown. Its door was a bit peeled too, but mostly painted green. You could tell that the window’s glass was replaced becouse the look on it looked cleaner and did not blend in with the house. Relaxing the grass was the whistling wind flying slowly; this made the loose tiles on the roof mumble like they were talking. 







 Everything was ok and comfy - ish. Everything was ok to use. There was no TV. No stove. No plugs. So far no electricity, bad; everyone likes TV. Then I saw that there was no tap or taps for the bathtub. I was amazed that the house had no electricity for the bathtub.Everything was ok, for a crazy person.Looks like a big mess, like you are livin in a rubbish can.

Tuesday, 9 September 2014

How do you make a sock puppet ?

WALT: to write a explanation writing. I think I did well at the end where I tell about his brother and sister. I think I need to work on putting making the font the same size.



Monday, 1 September 2014

monument recount

WALT: to go to a pace and write a better recount. I think I did well at describing the things I see. I think I need to work on making what I see more inserting.
I remember when Miss Nicola took room 4 up monument hill on 18.8.14 ( Monday ). I was nine when it happened. When we reached the top of the hill the view was amazing there was so much amazing things in the view that even an artist wooden have a chance  to paint it.Whoosh went the the tiny speedy cars as they raced slowly. Suddenly I saw the weirdest tree ever, it was a red tree, only one red tree. I was astonished. Then I looked again, one of the trees looked like carrot tops. The hills look like green sandy deserts.I looked closer,  one of the hills had a sandy strip down its side, then I decided to name it Strip, I was amazed I really named a hill. Suddenly, I heard the soft tweet of the birds.Then the fresh air relaxed all our tired bodies, excepted are growling tummies. I looked one last time, a sharp but short pencil  pointed to the white string in the sky, and the gates were so tiny that you could only see a little bit of them. “ Time to walk along people” yelled Miss Nicola happily, and we walked excitedly along to the next path Miss Nicola was planing. Suddenly, we were walking with,  on or in nature.Then Miss Nicola gave Chanelle the ipad to take photos. Chanelle mostly took photos of  me and Adrianna together. ( Adrianna is my BFF. ) Then we walked all the way down back to the school. On Wednesday Miss Nicola told us that are writing was awesome so she told us that she would take us other places once a week. ( Miss Nicola if you are reading this to me you are the best teacher ever. )     

Monday, 18 August 2014

Eagle Women

 we were learning to have fun and create a way to work and have fun at the same time. I think I did well at the story. But I think I need to work on making the story more short.




Friday, 15 August 2014

how your heart works

WALT: to find out how the heart works.I think I did well at putting it in my own words. I think I need to work on finding new photo.



That was summer



WALT use other authors as teachers. I think I did well with the first slide and the last slide. I think I need to work on puting less describing words in.

FAWN


WALT: Miss Nicola told us to read a book in a week then review it. I think I did well on the last slide. I think I need to get better at filling the slide.

Aga kakahu tika

WALT: to name kakahu in te reo maori. I think I did well at the start and the end. but I think I need to work on making the middle more tidy.
 

Wednesday, 30 July 2014

Storm

We were learning to write a recount about the stom in the holidays. I think I did well at puting a hook on the end. I think I need to work on short and long sentences.






 “Oh,no” I screamed unhappily as my umbrella turned inside out then the sky's tears slowly dripped down my pale and wrinkled face. Bang!, I jumped next I knew I was racing to my mothers house puffing for air. My jelly legs only took a tendency wency tiny step, and do you know what happened next? I flopped to to the polished floor “o man” I cried tiredly. I crawled to my white door to my white room. Then I flopped slowly on my bed and relaxed my chocolate eyes. Bam! I woke to my surprise my window was flung open I squeezed tightly into my fluffy blanket with questions racing around in my head, is there a monster in the house? did the wind blew it open? are the blue rain drops going to flood my room? The last question made me get up and close the suspicious window then I raced to my bed. Then hid under my fluffy purple blanket with my head tucked in then suddenly, I fell asleep then I heard a pitter patter on the bumper roof like a tiny piece of a hammer hitting a nail over and over. And the next thing I knew I was asleep. So lets just go to sleep. Good night.

Friday, 25 July 2014

5 and more



Today we were learning to  do some six time tables and used our 5 times tables to help us. I think I did well at saying it. I think I need to work on making it not this easy.

Tuesday, 24 June 2014

buddha,s hand

this is a buddha,s hand, me and my class had to search what a buddha,s hand is,here is some facx,s that I found

maths reflection




Today I practiced my multiplication facts, I scored 100 in 2 minutes and 12 seconds. My goal is to learn all of them. I need help with the 12's and I plan to do this when I am 11.

Thursday, 10 April 2014

Just kidding

Today we are lerning how to read a story and summarise it and post things on our blog. I nead to triy not to be scared and be louled.And I think I did a good job by making my voies clear.

Thursday, 3 April 2014

Cyber smart


we were leaing how to be syber smart. I think I did well at telling how to be syber smart.  I think I need to work on making the words on the front page bigger.